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WALT: Edit and up-level our rainforest poem.


Success Criteria

I can read my first draft carefully and think ambitiously about how I can improve it.

I can use word mats to inspire and improve my vocabulary.

I can use an appropriate layout for my poem.

I can up-level my poem with personification, similes and rhyming words.


You did a fantastic job yesterday writing your first draft of your poem! Today, we’re going to think critically and ambitiously and search for ways we can make it EVEN better. Go through the PowerPoint and the checklist to see if there is anything you can tweak or add. You could use a different coloured pen, like we do in school, to edit your poem from yesterday. 

Tomorrow you will be writing them up and performing them to your family!